Beautiful and emotional, but there’s a bit missing there. I see what this is going for and why many may like it, but this didn’t quite manage to make me care about those characters enough for it to really have the impact. The first half was shaping it really nicely though. The shortness of the story was both a strength and a weakness.
I like the left justified texbox, but it’s a bit weird that there’s never something in the bottom right corner (unless I missed it). The illustrations are gorgeous and fit the story very well. The music and sounds work well too.
Overall, it didn’t quite get there for me, but great job nonetheless!