Fun little take on the difference in lifestyle that comes from technology use. The small age gap and larger gap in interests say a lot about each character. In spite of the brevity, you got their vibes across very well.
Wonder’s cynicism is blunted by his willingness to try the bar despite his reservations, which really helps make him likable. Mirth had me on board when he dropped a “golly gee”. The writing gets a lot across without many words, the music fits with the atmosphere and the presentation works.
The story leaves me a little empty. Again, you’ve gotten a ton of characterization across in very little time. I’m trying not to read too deeply into something you didn’t intend to make us question heavily, but it feels like a scene from a larger story we’re only getting a glimpse of. Especially with the sour interaction between Wonder and the tanuki. I’m wanting more, some sort of resolution.
Regardless of my singular qualm, I liked it. There’s no incorporation of the theme, but it seems like you knew what you wanted to make and succeeded. Well done.