I really like the way you guys stitch this game. Especially the art style. The difference between the gameplay and the cutscene art style, and how it all blended in the end, is really nice. Even from gameplay perspective, the fact that you support full keyboard mechanics is really nice.
I do wish its was a bit longer, and the sound effects was punchier and more satisfying when you type. Because then you can even play around with it when the character is starting to lose the satisfaction of hustling.
Overall to be honest, keep this concept in mind. It felt personal, and I do believe when done correctly it can be a simple narrative game in the future.