Well it only got better reading trough it properly, I kinda hope we can get trough some characters avoiding possible kinks we might find to extrem or against our taste, like I don't enjoy most things to close to NTR or what might count as that, but this looks like it might be funny enough and all of that. I Just hope the story is not forgotten between the nsfw scenes.
Okay I can't say more currently. It is a nice first taste i guess.