This is the most “I don’t think it’s for me” VN of the jam yet.
About half of the time, I was thinking “can we move on already?” and that doesn’t feel great. A mix of scenes that seem superfluous and just slow pacing in general. People who like contemplative moods and weird tangents will love this, I’m sure. Maybe I would have liked this more if I read it alone; or maybe I would have just quit. I don’t know.
Besides that, the writing itself is very good, the story has some really good moments. The visual presentation is really distinctive and cool. A bit annoyed by the texbox not aligning with the text quite right… This being all CGs is a bold choice, but it causes quite big difference in quality: some of the CGs are too doodly.
Overall, it’s a solid package with just the right element to get me to not like it too much. Thankfully, the second half picks up a bit, so I still had an enjoyable experience in the end. Good job!