I like this game. There are some typos here and there and some confusion in the story(Like how Clarence asks what happened to HER even though Lucas never mentioned Julia or that she is a woman). But damn, with consistent updates to sprites and story this VN will be one of my favorites. I only played Clarence and Presodal's route so far since I did not like the sprite of the dragon and I wanted to see the "what ifs" first before doing Tiger's route(Why is his name only Tiger though?) but so far I quite like what I am seeing. The details in conversation is quite plain and not as elaborate as some VNs, but it isn't overly boring or flat, it conveys the emotion to the reader enough to understand it, but not to truly be immersed in the feeling. The characters are hot, with some sprite updates could be hotter(Especially Darius) but more importantly you can see each of their distinct personality. Granted there are only four of them as of now, but still. Overall I would recommend this Visual Novel as a delightful read. If the develop sees this, just know that your game is promising, and your taste in men is incredible.
TL;DR Clarence is hot, please don't change him too much with the resprite.