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Terrible font choice. Excellent color palette, layout, and style. Ditch the weird symbols (pi, hash, gear, etc.) and just use numbers for easy table access. Kudos for including a printer-friendly B&W version.

Otherwise, solid adventure. I'll be running this.

Love this straight forward and easy to use critique style. Thank you so much for the time and feedback!

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lol, you did say brutally honest. No need to mince words.

Mothership has me so used to being conservative and precise with my words that I guess that vibe came out in the comments.

Seriously, though, good job. This is well-written.