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This story was so adorable. And relatable too, in a way. Though the presentation leans on being a bit simple, the characters feel lifelike, on account of how often they make cultural references or even how the story gets incredibly detailed when it comes to descriptions of food. Even though the main LI is an angel (despite claims to the contrary), the story ultimately feels like a slice of real life. It's not a particularly long or involved storyline, basically just being a meet-cute (between several different relationships) but I enjoyed it nonetheless. The humor is also endearing, between Deva and those random patrons like the Linux one. The sketchlike sprites are also cute and so are the CGs. I keep saying it but that's probably the biggest appeal of this VN: its cuteness. If there's one thing I have to comment on though, it's that the folklore aspect really isn't that apparent. I had to look it up, and it seems that the original Sanskrit poem is about a cloud delivering a message to a man's wife, or something? Like I said, this is just a slice of life VN so there wasn't much in relation to that poem other than maybe a phrase in Sanskrit, and whatever was going on with the angel dude. It's never really explained, so that's a shame. Good VN, though.

Thabk you for your critique!  Yeah, theres not alot of wolves in Hindu mythology and folklore, so I had to get creative and stretch and allude to alot of things 


And no, Aryaman is not an Abrahamic Angel.