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Hi Neko4chan,

I appreciate you giving it a fair shake, despite the length, as I have trouble writing short stories as it always takes me awhile to develop my characters. I'm flattered that you found it engaging up throughout the entire 8 chapters. I've been influenced by the pacing of webnovel chapters to try and keep the writing more concise than some of my previous attempts. Best wishes!

Neko4chan20 hours ago(+1)

I'd also like to add that the sheer volume of this game is actually a huge plus! It’s exactly what gives the characters so much depth, making them feel real rather than flat. You shouldn't worry about the length at all—everything is put together beautifully. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I might not have emphasized that enough in my first comment.

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