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I liked this a lot, good job really leaning into the robot logic. The one note I’d give is to trust your readers, there are a couple of places here where you probably didn’t need the explainer (most notably the” best human analogy…” part felt a bit jarring). It’s a good thing though, that means your writing is doing the heavy lifting without needing to explain!

Great advice, thank you!