Thank you! There was a long time that I was near the bottom (Top? Top, I guess) of the "submissions lacking in reviews" feed. First Jam Jitters, I guess. Thanks again for taking a look.
Could you try mine as well? I was wondering why my review count was so low, but I did make my itch account the same day as I submitted my project to this writing jam. I don't know if it'll auto-link my submission below, but if not, it's https://itch.io/jam/oprwj14/rate/4624607 I'm not begging for a review, mind (although I would be grateful for one), would just like to know if people are getting a warning not to open my story.
It really is, I had a hard time fitting my piece into one page of the template, wound up cutting a character and B plot from mine. Good to work within constraints though, this is my first writing jam and I'm digging it quite a bit.
I really enjoyed this, the second half more than the first. A couple of little issues - a sentence missing a word in the middle of the story and it took too long to establish Jonathan as being in the cage. Overall, really enjoyable!
