A festival of hubris, I really enjoyed this one.
That was a lot of fun, nicely done!
That was really well told!
That was a lot of fun!
That was great! A really good take on the theme.
I really enjoyed this, the second half more than the first. A couple of little issues - a sentence missing a word in the middle of the story and it took too long to establish Jonathan as being in the cage. Overall, really enjoyable!
