Slight Spoiler Warning!!
I really enjoyed A Coin on His Mouth! But before I begin yapping, I just want to say I’m not at all experienced with reviews, but I still wanted to share my thoughts as a reader. So I hope this is helpful!
So for starters, the presentation was honestly my favorite part. The art looked amazing, and I liked how the UI shifts to whoever is speaking.
I also really liked both the concept and atmosphere of the VN. I liked the superstition in a morgue setting and the overall eerie tone that was set. It kind of gave me the same atmospheric vibes as The Mortuary Assistant, which I really liked!
But for me, I didn’t feel super emotionally attached to any of the characters, but that might just be my own experience with it rather than a flaw in the story. I just felt like I was just observing what was happening than really feeling fully immersed with the charchters, so the events felt a bit more expected for me. But I still found the story interesting to read through.
I also thought the ending, specifically about the main character that was said to have changed afterward and going into psychology and becoming more religious, was really interesting! I just wished that there was a bit more focus or developed on that part, since it felt like a big shift in his life. Overall though, I did enjoy it a lot. The art, UI, and atmosphere really stood out to me, and I’m glad I read it! I’ll have to keep an eye out for more stuff from y’all. Keep up the good work!!