The writing was light and gets me in the right mood, the sprites are well chosen. It was pretty funny too (I was wondering if someone was going to use the sword cock…) The realist vs believer dynamic between the boyfriends is a bit cliché but of well, it fits.
The presentation is a bit simple and there are some defaults in the way sprites are shown (the underwear appearing after Wyatt’s sprites sometimes while they should appear together; I feel like zooming in the backgrounds as well as the sprites would make more sense when shrunk…) Some places could have used sound effects (like the aforementioned sword cock).
The folklore is the cryptid they seek, so that’s pretty direct. The whole thinkg where nobody notices Zack is the automated peacock is still more baffling than funny (I guess the tail makes the peacock),
Overall, that was a fun little kinky rump. Nice job!