Your game's presentation is rather short, can't you tell a bit more to motivate players to try it?
What makes this game special? Who are its main characters? What are their goals and motives? What makes Raphael so special that he has to be the one to rescue the country? How is its world? What are its nations and cultures and how are they different from each other? What gameplay mechanics does it feature? Random encounters or enemies on the maps? Who is the antagonist and how does he threaten the country? What is the country's history and culture? What is at stake worth fighting for?
You barely said anything about your game which makes the impression that you barely care about it at all which doesn't motivate us to care any more than you do, you have to present it in a way to actually make us think that it is worth investing our attention, time and energy to experience it, do you get it?