(Minor spoilers ahead)
It was quite entertaining. I keep getting fascinated by what people can do in just a month.
I have enjoyed Terry's and Shane's relationship dynamic. bits of their interactions and stories helped in understanding their motivations without overloading the narrative.
The detective part is quite lacking, there are cool point&click mechanics, but they don't require you to think much.
However, I can't say that it wasn't fun. Very few FVNs have those, so any gameplay feels very satisfying.
I would notice that the game's pacing is quite inconsistent. It speeds up a bit too much in moments, especially at the end.
Some plot lines don't lead anywhere. For example: What's the deer girl role in the story? All she does is stop Terry from going into an abandoned building, and then they talk about the monster, which doesn't lead to anything certain. I have a feeling that initially, more was planned for her character.
What happened to Mary? Did she survive or not? Why did the characters forget about their promise to Sophie?
Despite not having an answer to these questions, I still consider this entry more than worthy.
I hope to read more of your works in the future!