Hi there! I just cracked this open after hearing about it on There's a TTRPG For That, I'm loving the vibes, but I noticed there seems to be something amiss with the PDF Outline/Bookmarks. There are blank lines in the bookmarks after "Inspired by Asian Cultures", "A Story-Driven Game", "Types of Noodles", "To Start", "Cycle of Play" and "Basic Moves". It doesn't break anything, but it looks weird, so I thought you might want to know.
My pleasure! I'm liking a lot of what I see, but I'm confused about a couple of things:
- Making Noodles on page 3 says you "produce two noodles" if certain criteria are met which is confusing with the later assertion than this can be stacked. Maybe "You make an extra batch of noodles if..."?
- Dinner Rush on page 4 talks about cycles and hours, but I'm not really sure how they interact or whether they are different? If I am playing a 3 player game, I have... 4 cycles and 3 hours? Is that just the same as 7 hours? Each 'cycle' is a turn around the table and uses up an hour?
- The Earth Bear on Page 9 says "If you have 2 kinds of noodles with more than 6, " -- more than 6...what?
- Night Bear, Page 12: "Explore a dream through answering one of your Drives." -- is this supposed to be "We answer one of your drives through a dream?" or something? More like "Answer one of your Drives by exploring a dream?"
That's all I got on a very quick skim! Thanks in advance for your answers!