Hey I came from another page, your link for the CGDCT Vn game jam. Either way, Ik it's been 2 years since yu posted this but I LOVE IT. The story telling and use of sounds, effects and moving elements is just chef's kiss. It's good because I don't see a lot of VN taking advantage the moving elements. The sounds are comedic but might be a bit too repetitive after a while, still funny tho XD