I have a soft spot for Twine games, you were great at setting the story's pace and the art was nicely done to set the environment. The desolate feeling reminded me of the game Lifeline, and how you guide the character to their end..depressing, but needed. There were a few typos, but they weren't noticeable. I really felt for the character when they had to come to these horrifying conclusions about what had happened...nice job! (: