I think the only criticisms I could lend are a few hiccups where the same word ends up too close to itself (though ending, then starting a sentence, placed in a place) but that's about it because this was wildly immersive. Very aesthetic and maybe its just my bias for mad inventor villians but I would love to see this story expanded on. I was not expecting that conclusion but I'll always prefer a subtle approach to the theme than something overt, so high scores