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Excellent work. You did a lot with 1 page. Setting was in quite solid, easing the reader, establishing stakes, even a conclusion all within the constraints of the assignment. The theme was cleverly worked in. Impossible to rise above one's station, the improbable even, I dare say the Havoc mutants being provided a way out by sheer luck/chance is just another layer to appreciate. 

Thanks so much! I can't take all the credit - I did put a couple of other eyes on it before submission. I'm glad you enjoyed it.