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Sometimes faster-than-light travel is a little more art than science. I'm glad you liked the story!

I think that definitely would've made for a much better story in hindsight. Oh well, there's always next jam. Thanks for reading!

That was an awesome read, Romeo and Juliet with mechs is a fantastic idea. Keep up the great work!

And the punchline at the end was amazing, well done!

I'm glad you enjoyed it, I thought that the punchline was the perfect grimdark twist to a story that was doomed from the start.

Good story! It reminds me of The View From Halfway Down from Bojack Horseman, the countdown added a lot of suspense.

There was one line that took me out of it for a moment near the beginning, though. I had to reread it a few times to comprehend properly. For the future, "greenhouses" is one word. 

Beyond that, no notes! It was a fantastic read!

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

How dare you make me cry for demons! Well done!

That was a fantastic read! I never expect to read from the perspective of a zombie.

I've been playing Dwarf Guilds a lot in my Firefight games (and winning a lot with them, too). I definitely enjoyed putting them in their place a bit - it's grimdark, after all! Did we expect a happy ending? 

Thanks so much! I can't take all the credit - I did put a couple of other eyes on it before submission. I'm glad you enjoyed it.