Buddy you're playing a visual novel obviously its like a story.
You should try and find VNs that are more spread out in their storylines (where choices really do get you in different directions) instead of blatantly hating. This novel demo was really well made and i personally can't believe you sat down and wrote this garbage statement that isnt even creative critisisim in the slightest as a response (I'm not saying you arent allowed to dislike something, but it is rather selfish to just go out and hate on the creator for what is a YOU problem and not related to the functionality of the game itself.). How low must your attention span be to consider this demo plot 'long' in the first place? As someone who loves VNs I'd say this is one was in fact rather short compared to others, buts thats fine in itself because there is promise of more content('100,000 words') at its full release. Afterall, when most people pick up a visual novel, they want a time-worthy experience and good writing is usually more potent in (but not limited to) longer stories because it really allows the charcters, settings and lore deepen and develop. Look, I get it, maybe this VN setting or plot isnt for you, and there's nothing wrong with that. But, next time keep your negative opinions to yourself unless you want to be constructive by reporting a bug / misspelling or something like that.
Would you appriciate some person commenting on your work and hating on it literally just to hate?
Seriously, Get a life.