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It's a major improvement and way more easier to understand. The thing I'd comment on is how tiny the toggling triangles that expand and close  are, I didn't notice them at first. People with vision issues might not notice that.  Then there's the characters and choices section which seems to be blended together? That part is a bit confusing but I see that this is probably supposed to be demonstrative? Are you using AI to make this as well?