I intended to have an alternate ending, but by the time I finished the main path, it was already late in the evening Sunday; and I was dead tired by then. Maybe after the game jam is over I can work on one as an update.
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Hey! Yeah thats how i felt right before i submitted mine 😴, glad I wasnt the only one!
I was honestly pulled into the narrative, but as feedback it *wasn't* the opening sequence that did it. it was the exposition with the maid who i assume is actually the daughter.
And I used to work directly with electricians. Let me assure you, when they were called out to fix something they often were given the best idea about who the client was by their manager as was possible. thinking on it more, it'd be more likely that the maid woudlve called it in to and talked to the electrician on duty for night calls directly, possibly even waking him up out of bed. I think pulling the maid in ASAP would be better. do what you will with that feedback, but always bear in mind players are right 90% of the time about when something doesnt feel good enough and wrong 90% of the time about how to fix it.