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(sorry for taking long I fell asleep)

Norra: well first I was born of course nd my parents took me home and the more I grew the more distant my parents became . It was like I was invisible to them. I would always get peanut butter and jelly for breakfast (she allergic to peanut butter) and when I asked them for something they would either ignore me or push me away saying "no" all I had in my room was my closet and my bed and all my belongings were my clothes. I would hide in the closet when they fight (yeah ik cliché) my mom saying dad is lazy and things like that and my dad saying my mom is such an obsessive shopper and things like that. I knew they would divorce someday but it didn't matter to me . They would never love me either way. Then one day... one... day.... *starts to cry* no please.... leave me alone... what do you want... nonononono please I'll do anything.... NO! *Gets up and knocks things on the shelf over* *gasp* i-I'm sorry. I didn't mean-. I'll try again.

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Arubino: okay, lets try this: you will only tell me the part at the very end, lets see if that works!

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)5 years ago

Norra: I went out to get something then I was knocked out when I woke up in was somewhere dark and I was tied up. I don't know why but I couldn't speak something was blocking me i heard a voice it told me to relax that it won't hurt me if I do what it says so I nodded my head silently and they took the thing off my mouth and gave me some random book about people dying and disappearing mysteriously and told me to read it then write a diary entry about it in this book. I had stayed there for years reading and writing every single day and the longer I stayed the more I realised how crazy he was how mad. One day all the word went blurry and I couldn't write anymore I was scared and he hadn't really been treating me well but it got worse the more I couldn't read then one day I flat out fainted at the mere thought of the book and he left me to die on the streets and rot. I looked around and there had been no missing posters of me nobody went searching for me nobody even cared I was gone not even my parents. I was never able to read or write and was always afraid of anything to do with that. That's when I went to the forest and the pack took me in. *breathes heavily* that was hard to do. *cries* are we done here can I leave?

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Arubino: *shocked by this truth* n-norra, i'm- -she stands up and starts walking at you. But then she trips and falls down... she doesn't make a sound... (somethingswrongicanfeelit-)

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)5 years ago

Norra: I heard something fall are you OK what happened I CAN'T SEE! *Gets up and stubs her toe* OW OK NOT A GOOD IDEA! IT'S MOMENTS LIKE THESE WHERE SIGHT IS IMPORTANT! HELP!

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-you feel something like water under her... is it...? its kinda like... blood... it smells like blood... it is blood!!-

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)5 years ago

Norra: ... *she just fell to floor and though she was already blind she closed her eyes tightly and plugged her ears blocking everything out she dropped to the floor again to lay down and fell asleep without noticing it she was crying in her sleep but her dream was far worse than it seemed.*

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in the dream(idk what to do):

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)5 years ago

(Ok so this is a kinda complicated dream you see it may be hard to understand but please bare with me.)

*Norra appears her eyes closed in the dream*

Dream norra mind: this feeling? I feel cold. Empty. Where am I?

*she seems to be underwater*

Dream norra mind: I'm drowning? What is this...

Dream norra: *gasps like she needs air* *opens eyes while gasping but closes them again accepting fate*

*Norra opens her eyes* *she is in the air*

Dream norra mind: I'm flying? No falling. From where? Where will I land? Am I going to die? I feel like the ground will never come. Why? How?

*norra is now surrounded by darkness*

Dream norra mind: the floor feels wet. No not water. Aru?

Dream norra: *looks next to her* *Aru is standing her eyes completely black and the entire room filled with blood* ARU! *she runs toward her but she seems to be getting further the closer she comes* *she trips on something* *looks at it* sh-Shadow? *shadow is sitting on the floor and then she stands up her eyes have also gone completely black* *she tries to grab shadow but the closer she comes the further she gets* *next to her toffi is standing* toffita? *her eyes are the same just black emptiness* iraz? *she is also there eyes completely black like the rest* *she stands up only to be pushed back down* everybody is standing around her staring at her with a look of disapproval* guys? *her parents her town the pack her friends and everybody she knows*

~~look at her.~~ Such a mistake. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Ew look at how she's dressed. What a disappointment. Loser! She doesn't even deserve to live! What an idiot. I heard she's a murderer. ~~I heard she kept begging her parents for a new toy when she already had hundreds and her very own TV.~~ ~~Spoiled brat.~~ ~~she's so pathetic.~~ ~~How can such an ugly thing live in mean look at it.~~ ~~You know she's scared of books for no reason.~~ ~~Really what a scaredy cat. Makes her more pathetic.~~

(I gave up on that part so the spaces still have lines in them just ignore that)

*everybody walks away from her while laughing and aru is left*

Dream Aru: *reaches her hand out*

*tries to grab her hand and pull herself up but she falls bc Aru moved her hand*

Dream Aru: hahahahaha! You're so stupid! I don't know why I was ever friends with you! Hahahaha! *she walks away*

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Iraiza: Aru? Norra? are you two done- OH MY GOD! GUYS! W-WHA- WHAT IS- ARU!! *she falls next to you two* N-NORRA, NORRA WAKE UP!! N-NORRA! PLEASE, ANSWER ME, PLEASE! *she starts crying* p-please... guys... Aru... *she looks at Toffita, devastated* p-please... call the doctor... now...

Toffita: *on her way to the doctor's office*

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