I really like this story—especially the high-quality visual setting, rendered in beautiful, warm colors. The music and the attention to details also give a sense of just how much effort has gone into this so far, leaving me eager for more.
My only surprise was, that the MC realized the truth about his hosts so early on. I would have kept him in the dark for a few more days. ;-)
Thank you for this kind comment. I’m really happy you enjoyed the overall presentation of the story so far. A huge amount of care went into building the world and mood of the VN, so hearing that those elements stood out to you genuinely means a lot!
And honestly, your point about the MC discovering the truth so early is completely understandable 😂 That was actually a very intentional choice on my part. I wanted the story to focus less on whether Adrian would discover what his hosts are, and more on what happens once he does. A lot of the tension and character dynamics later on come from him knowingly living in that environment rather than being completely unaware of it.
I also liked the idea that the truth is almost lingering in the air from the beginning. These guys aren’t perfect manipulators, and there’s something a little fun and exciting about warmth, comfort, and danger all existing in the same space.
Thank you again for playing and for taking the time to leave such thoughtful feedback. It genuinely means a lot and really helps motivate me to keep working on the project.
