Visually stunning, story feels good so far and feels fairly inspired by Twilight, and maybe Straight!? in some areas, and I was surprised, though I shouldn't have been seeing how much effort went into building this world, you showed us the reason Adrian left home, which is a brilliant hook to get drawn in to Adrian's life and how he'll get attached to the way too damn gorgeous Love Interests, Romeo and Jett are certainly my favourites so far.
Only draw back was the train sequence those cuts were very hard and fast, a warning for that section would be a great heads up. The water is another thing that was a little iffy, quality was great, but while it was angulating through song it looked a little off texture wise.... maybe try ripples hitting off the posts, rocks and coming off from the lands edge or you know what, ignore me entirely, because this is your story and world building and it looked great and I am being nit-picky about visuals and I'm pretty darn sure that'd be more animating work for you.