That story was really beautiful, I'm glad I found this while researching Twine! It was an impressive showcase for ways you can use it to make the literature very interactive while devoting fewer words and art assets-- things like the background changing to denote the time period, the colors changing to denote the speaker, the giant scrawls of text to denote panic, the text you can change to try to "think up a better option," and much more. It was very well thought out.