Interesting game. I ran it twice and it is very unclear what is happening. The plot feels very disjoint.
"Team you grew with all you dreams alike until that check was sign" <== this is such a weird sentence that it sounds like it is AI generated...
I checked - Whimtale engine was released just a few months ago. It's cool that you decided to use it.
It seems that there is much to work on to make the story feel cohesive. Good luck!