Hey, Skane! How's it going? I tried reading some of the pages you posted. The result: My poor eyesight couldn't make out most of the text because the font was so tiny.
I’m not a huge fan of Japanese settings for RPGs, but I do like to see how different creators approach the genre. If you’re looking for feedback, try re-uploading some of those pages in a larger size, or post excerpts as PDFs—maybe that will help you get some feedback.
Best regards.