The comic on your page was super cute, but would be better as a cutscene at the beginning of the game. The game play didn't seem to have anything to do with sleep, but that's because I couldn't get past any of the first obstacles so maybe i have to assasleepinate wakeful people later in the game? the FOV had a lot to do with the difficulty of the parkour, and when i did manage to get onto the swinging bar I got instantly motion-sick. It would do well as a 3rd person game, however I did love Mirrors Edge so you might be able to fix it with FOV adjustments and maybe some player hands; or another option could be to only switch to 3rd person when swinging. Or maybe make the collisions for obstacles more forgiving?