The thing holding this submission back the most in my view is the chaotic map. You are not really able to read properly what is written due to overlapping objects. The map itself is very good but it is not clear where to start reading or what to read next. I would make the map a little smaller and move the text to the free space that has been opened up. Alternatively you could add some kind of background to the text so that it does not overlap with the lines in the image.