Hey there, okay so i think the idea behind this module has a lot of promise, and I really hope you make a post jam version! As others have stated the layout leaves a lot to be desired, you have a cool adventure here that unfortunately gets bogged down by not knowing the right information when you need to know that info, and have several points where things are allowed to become to wordy, and yet also places where you had to reduce the text size so much as to need to zoom in to make it out.
Please hear me, the module deserves more time! you have something good here you are just fighting against the format at the moment. Reach out on the Discord, i’m sure there will be plenty of good feedback on iterations and you can make this module really sing!