I really enjoyed reading through this! Strong writing, fun hook, the layout is clean, and colors contrast well throughout. In particular I like how you handled labeling Time to Critical O2 Level table and worms-with-plasma bursts. Cool work!
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Thanks for the kind words, and I'm particularly delighted to hear that you like what I did with the O2 levels. That table was a real sticking point for me... I tried it as a normal grid both ways (with levels as rows or as columns) and it couldn't work in the space available either way... either the content wouldn't fit or the labels wouldn't. So that was the solution I eventually came up with and was quite pleased with, so I'm glad someone else noticed.