Thanks so much for the encouragement!! I also knew I needed to refine the mechanics, but frankly just didn't have time to get it done lol I also knew it was pretty different from a lot of MoSH modules, and honestly this week have been afraid those differences turned people off from it. Hearing that people enjoyed it means the world!!
It's also one part of a campaign I'm in the midst of running with 4-5 adventure sites in the same system, and honestly your comment has inspired me to consider expanding this into a zine, then writing up the other three parts of the campaign as their own zines, and capping it off with something bigger about the Light Father's eventual return.
We shall see!!