Love it even though the current Background Story Chapter was an important but sad part of it, the rest of it is intriguing, hot and very endearing and at parts funny.
So, it's a really nice VN with twists and all - and I'd be happy to help with the few spelling mistakes or word mix-ups, if that was ok.
Also: the little guy being flooded with so much hot stud's "Lovejuices" would probably be temporarily inflated and the massive tools he's taking, also would show up at the outside of his very stretchable little magic-enhanced body, I'd reckon ;-P - So, temporary inflation sprites would be very hot addition for the "intimate scenes" at least...or some of his toppers also gobble up his "Lovejuice" for a nice change.
Gray looks like he'd be one of the characters likely to do it, but also Ash maybe and of course Rask and Rarok and his brother Akhbal. Any primal ones but also the sensual ones, I could imagine being "inclined" to also have their Lovers' Essence "not wasted".
Also, what Spark/Ark says about them bonding all with each other is something I hope that'll happen...I mean at least all who got some Demon-Blood have basically shared a different "Essence" with the MC, too...even though it was for healing them first. There's interesting possibilities for development still and I'm curious and looking forward which ones you're following up on...you don't need (or should even - for surprise's sake) to disclose your plans for the story though. I'm happy to just follow and see where it's heading. But you already show so much potential with this, that it sparked a lotta deep emotional immersion (rare these days!) and many strings of where the story could be going- which makes it exciting to wait for the next Update, too....and most definitely earns the 5 stars I just gave your Novel already. And if people criticize the sprites, that's something that could still be added later, too...story is something most important to me and reading your answers to the comments here, you're growing with the project, which is beautiful, too. There aren't too many such VNs these days.
Thank you for the review, no need to worry about spelling and stuff, I try to reread and fix whenever I have time.
Also for the inflation sprite, I'll think about it, It sounds kinky.
Though I can't answer the other stuff you've mentioned cause I might spoil some future scenes hehe.
But I'm glad you enjoyed it, More of the characters background will be revealed in the future builds ^^
Of course, I wouldn't expect you to answer any spoiler-ish stuff for the future, unless teasing it maybe with some cryptic hints or something, if you wanted to.
Looking forward to how it all will develop and would be cool, if there were also some scenes among White's Lovers/Friends with Benefits - maybe even developing into a proper Polycule even in the future. I mean: he can't be there for "everyone, all the time, all at once" (sorry for the movie-reference, couldn't resist ;-) unless he could inhabit several of his multiplied bodies with one consciousness...which would be quite an interesting skill to have though...
Still can't get enough of the perfectly balanced hot bods/rods and beautifully love-made facial expressions and story and all ... I totally understand that you're the one making the choices what happens in which way and everything, why I let myself be surprised which parts of all the players' feedback you find inspiring enough to implement and which not (also some might be really tricky or hard to implement coding-wise, so yeah, it's f-ing awesome as you've already done it so far and focus on what feels right for you above all the feedback. Otherwise it can also disturb your creative process and that's the last thing anyone could want/intent.
I know "decision paralysis" myself far too well to expect others to be better at it, even though, focusing on the core-vision and taking in suggestion, that feel "aligned" to it, usually can also help develop and "mature" the vision, if it's done in a non-rigid way, but also with the same creatively open-mind, that lets ideas "flow" in or be "summoned" by the Muse(s) (reference to the Dead can dance track/"song" "Summoning of the Muse" - witchy music, that helped me every now and then).