There are some really cool concepts here, i really like the double mechanic moving the story along and keeping things from the chance of too many repeats.
I do agree with others that the visuals, while not bad are lacking and adding some visual identity could also help with some layout and clarity.
Also i don’t know what size font you used in the box with the crews and their quotes but my old man eyes rebelled haha. I’d seriously consider finding ways to cut that down so it can match the other body texts (which is also small but readable)
all in all a very solid entry!