Really enjoyed this one, trippy and evocative in all the right ways. I will agree with what others have said, this could be larger, its bursting at the seems and my biggest gripe with it is the layout of information on the first read… once you know what is going on the module makes sense, but the way its laid out you don’t get to that till the 3rd panel and that makes the first read hard. That said once you HAVE read it it makes sense and i actually really like the “effect” of the flap (panel 2) folding over and swapping the map for the warden… very very cool…
So yeah amazing job, you should 100% consider expanding this to an 8 or 12 page zine, it could easily fill that with what you have here and a few pieces of art.
Thanks for making somethign Rad!