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I like the concept of The Archive a lot, and I think you have a lot of room to expand on it. The Settlement panel and the last panel with the past and present Archives seem to be rephrasing a lot of the same information, so i would remove one of them or combine the information. I also don't think you need the Archive Eggs section. You could just add a line to their mention in The Settlement section that a Curator comes if they're damaged. 

And I don't know that The Curator needs its own panel, since some of its behavior is rephrased elsewhere and I don't know that it needs a communication section outside of something like "teal lights indicate approval and red lights indicate disapproval. You could probably pare it down a lot. 

I like the traded miracles section. It could be combined with the Settlement section. 

This does feel like science fantasy, as someone else said, but I think that could be fun. I like the tone of it, I would just like the concepts here expanded more. Use the space to flesh out some townsfolk. What is their culture like? Why are they indifferent to all the bizarre happenings? Does the Archive extend into any other times? Could the PCs go there? Good work!