Congrats on your first jam! this is brilliant for a first time!
I enjoyed the funny dialogue and I think having to steal the flies to save up for the bone, is a funny use of theme. The artwork is nice too and lends itself to the comedic tone of the game. I also liked the addition of the little mini game for stealing the flies I think that was a nice touch!
The controls felt a bit odd though I'm not sure what's going on, if I press jump and walk at the same time, they seem to cancel each other out so it was a bit awkward to jump across the platforms.
Good job overall though, Well done! : )