- Art 4 - Very good overall, but the white text on the red panels is a bit hard for me to read. The non-selectable text is also a small issue for on-screen accessibility.
- Writing 3 - some typos like 'Revalation' and 'eanxiety' should have been caught with spellcheck.
- Game design 3 - I feel like I need more clarity and detail on what each stage of the Revelations consist of and what thresholds players need to cross to get to them. through exposure to the Ichor.
- Utility 3 - I feel like if the players are investigating/stealthing into a location like the Bio-Syn lab, I would want a lot more information on how many people are present, the layout, etc.