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Firstly, congratulations on submitting! Time loops are always such a tricky thing to write and even though there were some plot holes and bugs it was an overall satisfying play! Predicting what the player's thought process is essential to write these types of plots in order to write a satisfying twist and you did it so well^^ I walked straight into it haha Really impressive that you completed it within the month.

For a first complete game you should be proud of yourself! It was an enjoyable play! Well done :)

- Cheeze

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Thank you so much for playing it and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yeah I'm not surprised there are a couple of plot-holes. I had a general outline but there was a decent chunk of the story that I had to figure out as I was going along, and considering how I didn't have time to revise the script this is basically a rough first draft.

There's so many things I wanted to expand upon or explain more but those can wait for a future version I suppose. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story and the plot-twist regardless! Getting it done in a month was super satisfying, and seeing what amazing things everyone else has made within the same time, including your own game, has super inspired me to keep improving.

Thank you!

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It was really good!! At least yours is mostly complete! Unlike me hahah And Likewise! It was inspiring to see all that you achieved in the same time limit so I'm glad to have played your game!

You should be proud :)  Hope to see you in the next Mystery Gam Jam!

- Cheeze

Even if yours is a lot less complete I still really like the concept and the potential it shows! I'll be keeping an eye on it in the future,  and also hope to see you in the next Mystery game jam!

Thanks!