I've played through once and I like it a lot! Most text adventure stuff is a bit boring for me but I actually want to see all of the endings of this one. Really good stuff!
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I'm impressed by the prose, and the way you are able to portray Zella's stream of consciousness so differently from Tiffany's is really impressive and adds a lot to the immersion of the story.
I hope to see more from you!