I used a screen translator to translate chapter 2. Ticci Toby is adorable, and so, so kind. The way you drew him is perfect; your art style is adorable! His freckles are really cute, and his brown eyes are beautiful~ We like the same sort of breakfast, too! I hope I can get closer to him.
It's called 'Translate On Screen' but, you have to pay for it. Also I'm playing on mobile with an emulator called Joiplay, so the translator is for mobile.
Here is a link to it: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.recognize_text.translate.scree...