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I'm genuinely  interested in the plot and the characters, so it pains me to say this but ... the narration is so damn frustrating a times, it feels slow in a bad way, I feel like the mc is constantly repeating things or rephrasing endlessly what was said 30 seconds ago, some dialogues feels extremely long if I simply sum up what information were given yet I don't want to miss anything so I don't dare to skip a single sentence, but damn it's so fucking frustrating. No one else is commenting on this, so I guess it's a me thing...

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It's a you thing.

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I haven't completed my read yet but yeah it does seem a bit rambly at times

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Nah. Definitely not just a you thing. I also find myself getting annoyed at how MC just rambles on and on internally. Like I know how the MC is said to be an overthinker, but sometimes it becomes too much. Especially when he monolgues internally and gets anxious instead of just talking things out with Kai