make the default music volume MUCH lower, i'm glad i had the option to lower it but before doing so i was pretty much deafened lol
i find the idea of pressing enter to advance text in a VN kind of confusing. most of them use the left mouse button to do so
the constant permanence of the previous lines of text as the cutscene progresses is kind of confusing. VNs usually have a log mechanic that allows you to read the previous dialogs, while only showing the currently spoken lines at any given time
the chaotic nature of the cutscene system also makes it hard to understand who's actually talking at any given time
some typos here and there, like "what are the task?"
please add a button to close the game, i was genuinely surprised of having to open the taskbar to end the process when the demo was done lol
it kind of feels like a remake of your original game? why are you remaking it from scratch? i feel like you had reached some solid foundations back then, i would have just expanded that with the new stuff