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Ok sounds good on a lot of this stuff, but I will say I get your point on name thing and regaining memories, but that can still be done with our inputted name. Like maybe for some reason the only thing we remember is our name when we wake up and nothing else, then we can regain our memories still.

Like I said its biggest mood killer and just don't like being referred to anything else, so that will put me off more than anything and not want to continue playing at all. Or I will use something to fix it myself until like urm, until name change comes, which may not make story sense, but I don't want to be referred to as zero, like ever, I like being me.

One other piece of feedback that just came to me is the dialogue box, male it where it can be transparent, the red and how its presented isn't best, I like cleaner look.

And character coming, I guess I can get behind switch with femdom and maledom both. Will say many people don't like femdom, so having that dynamic will turn them off, maybe a choice of how each scene goes femdom or maledom, but that might create too much work, and lose switch dynamic you are going for.

But I am fine on rest of answers and sounds good, and yeah dick might be angles, just looks a couple inches bigger with blowjob and doggy, but maybe it is angles, I don't know. But yeah most of answers dound good and well.

But nice job overall, maybe I will keep an eye out, just don't know if I can get past name thing right now unless I just force change myself which sounds like I will unfortunately if I want to continue playing. Like I said maybe that is all we remember when we wake and just adjust or add some dialogue.

Edit: And sorry if this came across rude, its just one of things I am most passionate about when it comes to visual novels and when I can't self insert, I lose interest. Sounds like nothing will be done, so maybe I will force it myself or move on. Not trying to be rude again, sorry, just important to me. So I am sorry, you are doing a great job, but for me, this is just personal issue. So, sorry for last time.

Hey man, please don't worry, it didn't come across as rude at all. I completely understand your point, and I really appreciate you taking the time to help improve the visual novel.

Regarding the name, it will make a lot more sense in the next update. Very soon in the upcoming content, when talking to one of the girls, you will recall your name, and from that point on, your chosen name will be fully integrated into the story. You are only "Zero" at the very beginning because the corporations treated you as a mere asset, but upon waking up, you will show that you are still human.

As for the dialogue box, I can definitely look into improving it and adding a transparent option. This is actually a perfect opportunity for a poll! I can design a few different UI styles, show them to the community, and let the best one win. I'll make sure to set that up for the next update.

About the NSFW scenes and dynamics like femdom, whether a specific scene happens or not will depend entirely on the choices you make. Everything comes down to your personal playstyle and how you want to shape the encounters.

Thank you again for the honest feedback. I really hope you stick around and continue following the game—please don't drop it just yet!