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Hey man, please don't worry, it didn't come across as rude at all. I completely understand your point, and I really appreciate you taking the time to help improve the visual novel.

Regarding the name, it will make a lot more sense in the next update. Very soon in the upcoming content, when talking to one of the girls, you will recall your name, and from that point on, your chosen name will be fully integrated into the story. You are only "Zero" at the very beginning because the corporations treated you as a mere asset, but upon waking up, you will show that you are still human.

As for the dialogue box, I can definitely look into improving it and adding a transparent option. This is actually a perfect opportunity for a poll! I can design a few different UI styles, show them to the community, and let the best one win. I'll make sure to set that up for the next update.

About the NSFW scenes and dynamics like femdom, whether a specific scene happens or not will depend entirely on the choices you make. Everything comes down to your personal playstyle and how you want to shape the encounters.

Thank you again for the honest feedback. I really hope you stick around and continue following the game—please don't drop it just yet!

Thank you so much, MagicMan753, for taking the time to write such a detailed message! This kind of feedback is exactly what I'm looking for with this demo. Let me try to address all your questions and observations:

1. The initial name choice and still being called 'Zero' is actually intentional for the story. The idea is that the protagonist will slowly regain memories of his past life. Once he finally remembers his real name, the custom name you chose will start being used.
2. The dick size inconsistency really caught my attention because I actually used the exact same 3D model for all the scenes! It might be the camera FOV (field of view) in close-ups changing the perception of scale, but I will definitely look into ways to minimize this issue going forward.
3. I'm really glad to hear you liked the characters so far!
4. In the next update, I'll be introducing 'all' the girls in the bunker. You'll meet Sarah, the commander. She definitely has a 'femdom' vibe, though it won't be strictly femdom all the time with her. My intention is to explore both dynamics with her.
5. Yes, there will absolutely be threesomes and group sex (including girls playing with each other). I plan to add a lot of content like that! The goal for this game is to have a wide variety of NSFW possibilities.
6. You're totally right about the polls. They won't be used to dictate the main story or lore. I plan to use them mainly for deciding things like outfits, which characters to add next, and other smaller details.

I hope this answers all your questions! Rest assured, your chosen name will appear—it's really just a temporary side effect of the cryo-sleep amnesia. :D

Thanks again for the message and for testing out the visual novel! <3

Hi Apis4! This is currently a demo version to gauge player reactions and catch any early bugs. Right now, it's all about gathering feedback. I'm planning to release the rest of the Episode 1 content by the end of this month. I'll be developing EDEN4 using the same episodic format as Silent Corruption. I also really hope to get back to developing Silent Corruption in the future too! Thank you so much for the comment and your interest in supporting my work. <3

Hi! I'm really glad you enjoyed The Silent Corruption. I absolutely loved developing this Visual Novel. Right now, it is on hold—not by choice, but because I simply can't continue it the way it was originally planned.

As I mentioned before, I started creating it 2 years ago. I built everything from scratch: the development, the 3D modeling, and everything else. The actual content is much larger than the demo I released—about three times as big. I can even share some sneak peeks on Discord to show you!

The issue is what I explained on my Patreon. Unfortunately, after investing my own money to bring this project to life, my GPU broke down. It used to help me render things so much faster than my current setup. When I lost my PC, I almost gave up on game dev entirely. I also received some really unnecessary and discouraging private messages, but despite all that, world-building and bringing my ideas to life is still something I truly love.

Because of this, I decided to start a smaller, lore-focused project. My goal is to see if I can raise enough funds to eventually finish The Silent Corruption exactly the way it's meant to be. The world of Twilight City is huge, I guarantee you that. I really hope I can get back to working on it soon!

That's awesome to hear! I'm so glad you enjoyed the teaser.

And yes, absolutely. I'm currently focused on reworking the intro, which includes adding some brand-new scenes and a bit more detail that was missing before to make it a stronger start.

My plan is to get it out to all of you as soon as possible! Thanks for your excitement, I can't wait for you to see more.

Hey, thanks for the question, and no worries at all! I'm happy to answer any questions that come up.

I'm currently planning to release the next update between the end of this month and the beginning of next month.

For future updates after this one, I'm aiming for a schedule of releasing new content every three months.

My plan is to release each episode in parts rather than as one huge chapter. This is because very large episodes take a massive amount of time to produce, and I want to avoid leaving everyone in a "limbo" without new content for too long. By splitting it up, we can have more consistent updates.

And of course, during the time between releases, I'll always be posting progress reports on our Discord and Patreon to show how things are going.

Thanks for your interest.

Wow, thank you so much for the comment! You have no idea how good it is to read this, especially knowing you broke your "incognito" rule to write it. I truly hope you continue with the AVN for the long run.

I'm so glad you mentioned the art direction and atmosphere. My vision has always been to create pleasant visuals and an environment that's enjoyable to look at. In the upcoming update, you'll find new environments with that very same feeling.

To keep up with the AVN's development, I'm going to start posting a weekly dev-blog on Discord. The first one will be posted tomorrow, Saturday, November 10th.

Thank you again for the incredible support!

You're right, I'm completely new to this world. I actually started studying Python and Ren'Py just to make this game, and I've been using all my free time lately to improve it.

Episode 1 consists of flashbacks, but I can assure you there will be more NSFW scenes. As for their quality, I will do my absolute best with the animations. In the future, if it becomes possible, I want to hire voice actors to make the scenes even better. I think it's just a matter of time.

Thanks again for the kind words. I can guarantee that the new update will have a much smoother flow and better quality-of-life features than this version.

No worries at all, brother! I really appreciate the comment, even if you sounded a bit angry before. And yes, Portuguese! Here, we really don't pronounce the "H" at the end like in english, so it sounds identical with "Kate".

I know I should have paid more attention to that detail, but I honestly didn't even notice it during development. There are so many details to manage that sometimes, a few slip by unnoticed.

The important thing is that, over time, I'll keep getting more feedback from you all and keep improving whatever needs to be improved. That's what this process is all about.

And that description of an Australian "Keith" is absolutely hilarious, by the way! Definitely not the vibe I was going for with her, haha.

Hey, I live in Brazil, and the pronunciation of "Keith" here is exactly the same as "Kate" (K-A-T-E) in english, you know? So, it's possible to find girls with both names here, but Keith is more common because of the pronunciation.

That's why I got confused! And it's also why I already apologized for the mix-up in a previous post.

In the next update, I've already renamed her to Kate (K-A-T-E) to avoid any more confusion. lol

Hello, thanks for the feedback. Most people told me that, so I already announced these changes: 

Here’s what you can expect:,

 Gameplay & QoL Improvements:

• Disable camera shake.
• Instant text display.

Character & Story Adjustments:

• The character "Keith" will be officially renamed to Kate.
• Based on your feedback, Kate's "Queen of Spades" tattoo will be removed.
• The default player name will be corrected to "John".
• The license plate on the car in the investigation board will be fixed.
  

I used Keith, because in my country this is a female name, thats why and sorry for that, but I already changed. Will come a fix in the next update. Thanks for that.

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