Ah, a fellow counterpoint enjoyer! Glad someone else attempted it, it's pretty tricky but highly accurate for a melody focused jam. Like some of your instruments, gave a good atmosphere.
However I feel like a lot of your sounds didn't go well with each other and melodies didn't connect really well, it sounds more like a collage than a properly developed track. Although I appreciate the attempt at counterpoint, iI feel like it was still clumsy and didn't bring that much to the track.
Melody clarity 3/5
Melody impact 2/5
Composition 1/5 (severe lack of development in my opinion)
Listenability 2/5
Correlation to theme 1/5 (I didn't feel like your track was really connected to the story you provided)