Man that track was great, so immersive and emotional. It perfectly carries your story, and the shift to a darker tone gave me goosebumps, it's so so good.
I just wish there was a bit more of that lyre motif, that it was developed more upon instead of being repeated as-is throughout the entire track. That makes it redundant, especially in the end, which contradicts a story that takes a radical turn like yours in my opinion.
Btw could you tell me what samples or library you used for your percussion ?
5/5 everywhere, except for Melody impact that I give 4/5